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01 September 2010

There is a Poet in You - Random Thoughts # 5


Pondering over the process of growing up – every person seems to have gone through a phase when he (or she) has dabbled in writing poetry. Almost like music - its in everyone's blood; some sing, others hum, some just love to listen or just tap to its rhythm OR some even sing in the bathroom. I have yet to meet a person who never hummed or whistled a song or indulged in some form of music.
Most folks do it, ie., dabble in poetry, early in life; sometimes in the form of riddles or puzzles or even limericks, the more desi ones in sher'o shayari (Urdu couplets) or Hindi poetry. There is no language bar - every language under the sun has its share of poets and poetry.

I remember in my early school days in South Point, Calcutta; after I became a little proficient in the English language (as a shift from my Hindi background), I started writing simple riddles with rhyme e.g.:
"My first is in cover but not in page
My second is in sulk but not in rage
My third is in colour and also in yellow
My fourth is in sick but not in mellow
My last is in seek but not in see,
My whole keeps you as busy as a bee."
(Its obviously a 5 letter word. What am I?)

Then the growing up years introduced me to “Limericks”, they are those short and sweet 5 line poems where the 1st, 2nd and 5th lines rhyme; the 3rd and 4th lines rhyme. There are more rules regarding limericks pertaining to the lengths of the lines, syllables etc.; I shall not be delving into them here – the vast internet and google search shall provide the answers if you really want to know. A common example of a limerick:

Come on everyone let's play holi,
It's great fun if you are in a
toli,
Colours and sweets and lots of fun,
Running around is great if in the sun,
Then to conclude have some
bhaang ki goli.


(Author Varsha U Nagpal from the webpage "LIMERICKS & TRIVIA (Humour) Unlimited", this limerick has a few Hindi words thrown in holi - Indian Festival of colour, toli - group, bhang ki goli - a tablet of an intoxicant and a psychotropic substances) 

The third phase in the adolescent/teenage stage – when the person becomes a romantic. He may not write poetry – but he lives poetry. His prose also becomes poetic. This is more pronounced if the person falls in love. And that is inevitable. By 'love' I do not mean girl/boy love, it just means falling in love with anybody or anything – maybe a puppy, your garden, the river nearby, the hills or just rain... He could land up writing sonnets, they are those 14 line love poems. If you really want to know more about sonnets, the Wikipedia gives a lot of interesting information.
I have noticed the youngsters who end up writing sonnets or poems at this stage of life – often retain the interest of writing poetry for the rest of their lives.

What is so fascinating in poetry that prose does not have? There is a beautiful quotation by a Chinese philosopher:
"When you write in prose, you cook the rice. When you write poetry, you turn rice into rice wine. Cooked rice doesn't change its shape, but rice wine changes both in quality and shape. Cooked rice makes one full so one can live out one's life span . . . wine, on the other hand, makes one drunk, makes the sad happy, and the happy sad. Its effect is sublimely beyond explanation." - Wu Qiao.

Poetry is fascinating to the mind as well as to the ear, it is said that reading poems can exercise your brain in the same way that playing sport exercises your body.
Currently poetry has widened its horizons to such an extent that a beautiful artistic movie is referred to as “poetry on celluloid”.

Even if you have never written poetry but are fascinated by it – here is a simple guide (courtesy BBC.co.uk), give it a shot – you have nothing to lose; its a win-win situation:

Use your imagination. Add to what you know by making things up. How do you think Roald Dahl could write about living inside a peach, or William Gibson write about being in 'cyberspace', or Tolkien describe a hobbit or an orc? That's the power of a writer's imagination!

Write poem after poem. Often people feel their words have to flow and sound right as soon as they hit the page. If all writers did this nothing would ever get published.
Don't wait for the words and the lines to shape themselves perfectly in your head before you start writing. You can shape your ideas once they are on the paper. The important thing is to get started and keep going.

Think of yourself as a sculptor. You need a vision but you also need something to sculpt with. If you don't get something down on paper then you haven't got any raw materials to work with.

Use a dictionary and thesaurus. They help you make sure your writing is accurate and clear. They can also help spark your imagination - discovering a new word could be the beginning of a new stanza or poem.

Don't let your ideas get away. The best ideas can sneak up on you in the strangest places and at the most awkward times - on the toilet, in the bath, in dreams. Always carry something you can use to record your ideas - a notebook, a dictaphone, an envelope to hold scraps of paper.

Get feedback. Ask people to read your work and learn from their comments. Ask yourself: What can I do to improve my work?


Remember all the English grammar rules can also be ALMOST thrown to the winds in poetry and you will not only be forgiven, but also appreciated - as long as you can make it beautiful. Computers have made this so much simpler.

And most important, remember that a poem does not necessarily mean that you have to look for rhyming words – “free verse” is the current trend and today very beautiful poems are in free verse. Here is one in free verse, for the record:

You are you
And I am I,
The fond 'we'
Fashioned of you and me;
Has gone away,
And with it is gone
The mystic bond
Between you and me.
Now you are you
And I am I.

(Author - KP Varma; Book – Thirty Leaves)

Now is that not a beautiful short and meaningful poetry?

Just pick up your pen, open a notepad and start writing....



12 comments:

SM said...

very well written
yes everyone goes through writing it

Prithviraj Banerjee said...

Great post uncle. Very thoughtful comments.

I feel that Poetry enables us to navigate that unknown realm when we start without knowing how we will end - and we more than often we don't end up doing that bad :)

My favorite poem today was actually my favorite joke twenty years ago. Written by Basho, the celebrated Haiku poet, the Hindi version of the poem goes something like this ...

Maindhak kooda talab main ..
... Chaapaak !

Regards,

Deepak Menon said...

How wonderful a blog you have posted - ask any one who has read it and they will look at you askance with wonder in their eyes. The sublimity of poetry is so aptly stated in the Chinese saying you have mentioned - Poetry creates 'Wine' out of the cooked rice. One of these days I shall again write something meaningful and perhaps tinged with Nostalgia for the yesteryears now fading into the mists of time ...
I always enjoy reading yours and Varshas blogs - each so well written and so wonderfully presented with the great Travelogues about your travels ..
we must meet sometimes ...
Deepak

triloki nagpal said...

You have made my day Deepak. We are back last week of this month - looking forward to meet you.

Unknown said...

Nagpal,these days being busy in silver going preparations,i generally skip most of the emails,but am never able to do that with your email.i did go through your blog & as expected was extremely facinated by the thoughts.it is woderful.u r right in assuming everyone is a poet at one point or the other in their life but some of them r always poetic by heart-like u.does not make any difference whether u r writing poetry all the time or not.Perhaps it may interest u to note that i kept Diary with me all the years i sailed on merchant ships for 14 years.naturally it was a travelogue with stories & poems in it.it contained the so called urdu shiary in full flow.all those collections are today scaterred in some parts of the world with my friends.Insaallah- one day i shall retrieve it.Thanks TNN for reviving interest in just plain LIFE.

Unknown said...

Hi Triloki,
I liked your blog on poetry. That last poem was really rather nice, but hey, the limerick has to have two short lines - lines 3 and 4 - and the metre is very important because otherwise you don't get that lovely swing of the limerick. From what I remember there should be about 8 syllables in lines 1,2 and 5 and about 5 each in 3 and 4??

triloki nagpal said...

@Harish - you must gather up your diary and poetry, whether you publish it or write a blog whatever - you must leave it for posterity. Am sure your children will cherish it.
@Meera - You are right about the length of the lines in limericks, am aware of that but felt this may not be the appropriate platform to discuss all the rules. It would be nice if you join us up in the group "LIMERICKS & TRIVIA (Humour) Unlimited" on facebook. (Had given the Wikipedia link regarding the limerick's technicalities in the first discussion topic of the group in March 2009; had also simultaneously suggested flexibility for the group at the same time).

Pratap Ganatra said...

Hi Triloki,
Screws, Botls Nuts and machines etc. All these change to charming lucid pen in your hand to create such wonderful poetry and also inspire us tgo try the same.
Besides your wonderful sense of humour, your this quality is simply amazing. Keep it up.
Pratap Ganatra

Unknown said...

Its so wonderful to read Papas poem over here..... this was also one of my favorites. The beauty of poetry is that it has a uniquely different meaning for everyone who reads it .... and there is no absolute right or wrong.
It is sad that in todays very busy world and life one struggles to find time for poetry and art. I still read a lot but find its a dying habit for the next generation.

Anju

Pri said...

thanks for sharing this link with me..i enjoyed reading the post.

the poem u referred to me, is totally awesome..everything expressed in just a few words thrown together..amazing!! :)

Unknown said...

Wonderful tutorial on writing poetry. I started writing poetry a little late but it's never too late. Many suggestions about penning down something that strikes you hard are followed by me.
Thanks for accepting me in the group.
Manohar Luthra

Unknown said...

Wonderful tutorial on writing poetry. I started writing poetry a little late but it's never too late. Many suggestions about penning down something that strikes you hard are followed by me.
Thanks for accepting me in the group.
Manohar Luthra

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